TRANSLATION 1: THE STORY OF SNOW WHITE

IN ENGLISH

Snow White

A long time ago, a child was born to a queen and king and she was called Snow White. When the queen died, the king married again. This new queen was wicked and hated Snow White. The queen gave orders that Snow White was to be treated as a servant.

Snow White grew very beautiful and one day a Prince riding by, saw her at work and fell in love with her.

The queen was beautiful too, and every day she asked her Magic Mirror, “Who is the fairest in the land?” and the mirror always answered, “You are the fairest one of all.”

But one day the mirror answered Snow White was the fairest in the land, and in a rage the queen gave orders to one of her huntsman to take Snow White into the woods and kill her.

The huntsman had a kind heart and couldn’t do the deed so told her to run away. She fled into the woods where seven little dwarfs lived. Their house was small and strange.

Snow White entered the little house and finding it very untidy, started to clean up. Upstairs she found seven little beds. She was very tired and stretching out one of the beds, was soon asleep.

When the dwarfs came home they were surprised to find Snow White and after some arguments, decided to let her stay. She promised to cook and look after them.

The queen discovered where Snow White was living and disguising herself as a witch, took a poisoned apple and set out for the dwarfs cottage. She gave Snow White the poisoned apple to eat and as soon as she bit the apple, she sank into unconsciousness.

Thinking she was dead, the dwarfs built a glass coffin and put her in it. For days she lay in the forest in her glass coffin. One day, the prince was riding through the forest looking for Snow White and found her. He leaned over and kissed her. She opened her eyes and kissed her and set up with a smile. Everyone was happy. The Prince took Snow White to his palace where they were married and lived happily ever after.

Source:

http://overplayers.uk/html/snowstory.html

Translated In Bahasa

Snow White (Putri Salju)

Dahulu kala, seorang anak lahir dari seorang Ratu dan Raja dan dia disebut dengan Snow White. Ketika Ratu meninggal, Raja menikah lagi. Ratu baru ini sangat jahat dan membenci Snow White. Ratu itu memberikan perintah kepada Snow White dengan mengancamnya untuk dijadikan sebagai pelayan.

Snow White tumbuh dengan sangat cantik, dan suatu hari seorang Pangeran sedang berkuda, melihat Snow White bekerja dan jatuh cinta kepadanya.

Ratu yang baru juga cantik, dan setiap hari dia bertanya kepada kaca ajaib, “Siapa yang paling adil di negeri ini?” dan kaca ajaib selalu menjawab, “Ratu adalah yang paling adil diantara semua orang”.

Tapi suatu hari cermin ajaib menjawab bahwa Snow Whitelah yang paling adil di negeri itu, dan dalam keadaan marah ratu itu memberikan perintah kepada salah satu pemburu untuk membawa Snow White dan membunuhnya.

Pemburu itu memiliki hati yang baik dan tidak dapat melaksanakan pembunuhan itu jadi dia menyuruh Snow White untuk melarikan diri. Dia melarikan diri ke dalam hutan dimana tujuh kucaci hidup. Rumah mereka kecil dan aneh.

Snow White masuk ke dalam rumah mungil itu dan menemukannya dalam keadaan kacau, lalu memulai membersihkan rumah itu. Pada tingkat atas dia menemukan tujuh tempat tidur mungil. Dia sangat lelah dan meregangkan tubuhnya di salah satu tempat tidur itu, dengan cepatnya dia tertidur.

Ketika para kurcaci pulang ke rumah mereka terkejut menemukan Snow White dan setelah beberapa adu argument, para kurcaci memutuskan untuk membiarkan Snow White untuk tinggal. Snow White berjanji untuk memasak dan menjaga para kurcaci itu.

Ratu jahat menemukan dimana Snow White tinggal dan menyamar sebagai seorang penyihir, membawa sebuah apel beracun dan meletakkannya di pondok kurcaci. Dia memberikan Snow White apel beracun itu untuk dimakan dan secepatnya dia menggigit apel itu, dia tidak sadarkan diri.

Berfikir dia sudah meninggal, para kurcaci membangun peti mati yang terbuat dari kaca dan meletakkannya di sana. Selama beberapa hari dia berbaring di hutan di dalam peti mati kacanya itu. Suatu hari, pangeran berkuda melewati hutan mencari Snow White dan menemukannya. Dia bersandar diatasnya dan menciumnya. Snow White membuka mata dan tersenyum. Semua orang bahagia. Pangeran membawa Snow White ke istananya di mana mereka menikah dan hidup bahagia selamanya.

1. Problems and the solution that we found when we translated story about Snow White are:

1) It was hard to translate word using suffix like “untidy”, in Bahasa means “tidak rapi” but it is not sound great so for the strategies we change into “berantakan” it means same meaning.

2) We was confused with proper names in lexical problems like name “Snow White” did we change it in Bahasa or not that means Snow White is Putri Salju, so the strategy is we did not change it because according to Maremadi, he said that if the proper names should not be change. So that we just put Snow White in the whole text.

3) Sometimes, we can not translate phrase like stretching out, set out, and leaned over. So the strategy is we search in google and found it. But we suitable to our culture language.

4) When we met the long sentence, we was confused to translate it. For example sentence is “When the dwarfs came home they were surprised to find Snow White and after some arguments, decided to let her stay.” So we translate it word by word after that we change and suitable to the literal language because this story about literary. And the result of translated is “Ketika para kurcaci pulang ke rumah mereka terkejut menemukan Snow White dan setelah beberapa adu argument, para kurcaci memutuskan untuk membiarkan Snow White untuk tinggal.”

Made by Group 12 Translation 1 course.